Thursday, October 28, 2010

Critique roll 4 (lines)

First picture (Ashley): I really like the way that the line of the windowsill leads to Ashley to draw atention. I think the composition is pretty good, although she might be a little too centered.

Seciond picture (guardrail): I like the angle of tis picture and how the rail seeoms to go into forever. However, I should have used a filter to add more contrast.

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